Ring the Alarm
In her
rhetorical analysis of Anne Applebaum’s article, Tamar Demby pinpoints and
attacks the holes in Applebaum’s arguments so as to demonstrate the
journalist’s failure to make proper use of hard facts in supporting her
position on the use of nuclear reactors. Demby asserts that, throughout her
article, Applebaum continuously makes statements that she drastically fails to
support due to her lack of supporting evidence. The only verified details the
journalist uses are employed to manipulate a visceral effect in the reader,
thereby appealing more to emotion as opposed to logic. Furthermore, Demby
writes off Applebaum’s position entirely, stating that it is solely based on an
unfortunate case of “personal alarm” in response to the catastrophe as opposed
to a fair-minded article. Demby further attacks Applebaum’s credibility and
expertise, laying claim to the fact that instead of presenting a clear
viewpoint supported by solid evidence, the journalist “relies on hot-button
issues” so as to alarm her readers. In essence, Demby holds the article in
contempt, looking down with scorn on its ineffective, or rather inappropriate,
use of pathos as a rhetorical strategy when ethos would have been the more
fitting way to go.
I disagree with
Demby because, in re-reading Applebaum’s article, I found that the journalist
took a reasonable and balanced stance on the issue. I feel like she explores
different sides of the use of nuclear reactors, and although her position leans
towards its detrimental consequences, Applebaum still provides counterarguments
that give the reader some leeway to consider the other side of the story. In my
opinion, she is right in making a statement that the use of nuclear has costs
that go beyond the expenses of plant construction. After witnessing the
disaster brought on by the nuclear explosion in Japan, it is only logical for
Applebaum to shed some light on the immense social responsibility that
countries must be ready to assume when constructing their supposedly “super-safe”
nuclear plants. If Japan, one of the world’s most technologically advanced
nations, failed in its establishment of a nuclear plant – as demonstrated by
the explosion – shouldn’t other countries in the international community
reconsider their decisions to build strings of nuclear plants that will impact
people’s health on a global scale? Furthermore, Applebaum does provide valid
evidence about the development of nuclear power in Europe. The facts she uses,
although not geared towards the technological prowess of Japan, serve to
illustrate a larger point – that the fate of humanity cannot be gambled for the
sake of nuclear plants. One error could result in millions of lives – as was
the case in Japan. Applebaum is trying to make readers more conscious of the
ways in which the decisions of governments around the world could potentially
destroy or even end take their lives. She is highlighting that nuclear is not a
game.
Demby could
improve her essay by providing some counterarguments that would help
demonstrate that she has thoroughly reflected on all sides of the topic as
opposed to taking an immediate position against Applebaum’s article. Demby casts
Applebaum’s solely under a negative light, thereby taking certain parts out of
Applebaum’s article to use as biased confirmation of her point – that Applebaum
has failed to establish her ethos as a journalist. Demby does not analyze
Applebaum’s piece as a whole, but rather centralizes on the ways in which
Applebaum fails to support her claims of Japanese technological prowess. To be
more effective in her essay, Demby should take a more holistic approach in
reading Applebaum’s article so as to present evidence geared away from the
Japanese and towards other points that Applebaum failed to support that prove
that her article is not credible.
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